This week we continue our discussion of literary "selfies" with a piece by Jennifer Lundun that appeared recently in Diagram, called "Evidence, in Track Changes"). The piece includes an essay written by Lundun, plus margin notes added by her mother and Lundun herself. We talk about what makes an experiment like this feel organic, rather than gimmicky, and what sorts of writing lessons that line might offer. Also, plenty of our usual foolishness, including some discussion of trends that (like selfies) might stick around and become more or less accepted, another installment of Millennial M0m3nt, and for some reason a digression into the relative merits of Three Musketeers and its #ThrowShine hashtag. What do you expect from us, high-minded literary talk?